Dear Mr Jackson,
My name is Jay and I became your huge admirer after attending Rockstar concert. After watching spell bound performance, at Royal Music Hall, I could n't stop myself writing this letter. Particularly, your awestruck singing style inspired me to perceive my musical career. Ofcourse, all your band musicians were excellent but your mellifluous voice is exceptional and stood-out among other instrumentalists. Truly, words can't express my joy and how much I enjoyed the show. I must admit, yesterday is my dream came true and can never forget in my life. I absolutely loved your singing.
You might be surprised to know that I myself an aspiring singer and infact , lead vocalist in my college band. Previously, we performed at our town's carnival which got great applause from residents. Recently, I participated in a singing competition conducted by local council, where I was awarded with best singer prize. Further, me and my college band was invited for an upcoming talent show hosted by popular TV channel which is going to be a page turner for embarking my musical journey.
Therefore, I request you to give few suggestions and recommendations for improving my skills after listening to my songs which are there in the CD attached with this letter. I know for sure you are terribly busy person and have little time for entertaining these sort requests. However, as self-made artist, only you can understand my passion to the music and guide me right path. Besides, my future plan is to learn guitar and grow as solo vocalist just like you. Perhaps, you can take me under your wing so that I can learn from best in the industry. If it's not too much to ask, kindly join me for my next performance and let your presence boost energy in the orchestra.
Thank you for your consideration and look forward for your blessings.
Yours sincerely,
Jay
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 32.9175257732 164% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 937.175257732 163% => OK
No of words: 313.0 206.0 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88817891374 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70732107575 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 127.690721649 160% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651757188498 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 290.88556701 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2315111503 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 7.41237113402 229% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23291125299 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757133244061 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429195641207 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147021234858 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396228194538 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 41.2886597938 199% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.