Dear Sir,
My name is David and yesterday, along with my family, visited your restaurant to celebrate my daughters academic achievement.
As mentioned above, my daughter successfully finished her graduate program with distinction. Hence, we decided to commemorate her accomplishment with sumptuous meal at your hotel. However, the reason, our not so pleasant experience prompted me to write this letter. It's not my intention to be pedantic, but none of us enjoyed the food. Infact, our otherwise wonderful evening, spending time at your restaurant spoiled the whole experience.
Our disappointment started with starters, which arrived after 30 minutes of our order. Not to mention sour and pale soup which also ruined our appetite. On the other hand, main course was served cold and half boiled which made us to return the items. Even after raising concerns, with floor manager, no action was taken to serve us fresh and hot cuisine. Nevertheless, we had to leave the place with unsatisfaction after paying extravagant bill.
After explaining myself, it only sound's logical to seek full refund of our money. Therefore, I expect you to payback all the amount within fortnight. Further, I request you to double check quality of all ingredients before placing them on costumer table. Undoubtedly, your staff response was not quick and shows no sign of hospitality. Hence, I strongly recommend you either to recruit experienced members or train existing candidates. If possible, sending an apology letter from your team will cheer-up my daughter.
Hope my feedback letter will help to improvise your services and look forward to hear from you.
Yours sincerely,
David
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ience prompted me to write this letter. Its not my intention to be pedantic, but...
^^
Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...nce prompted me to write this letter. Its not my intention to be pedantic, but no...
^^^
Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... made us to return the items. Even after raising concerns, with floor manager, no...
^^
Line 11, column 79, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...mprovise your services and look forward to hear from you. Yours sincerely, Da...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 937.175257732 152% => OK
No of words: 265.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37735849057 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84740924509 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 127.690721649 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.709433962264 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 290.88556701 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.7236483471 44.8134815571 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.0 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9473684211 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228002158851 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614671475881 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046616148436 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122293235014 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498919683133 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 8.71597938144 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 41.2886597938 218% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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