You rented a car from a company and while you were driving on holiday you had a small accident You will have to write a letter to the company and in your letter Explain when and from where you rented it Describe how the accident happened what kind of acti

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You rented a car from a company and while you were driving on holiday, you had a small accident. You will have to write a letter to the company and in your letter.
Explain when and from where you rented it
Describe how the accident happened
what kind of action did you take after the accident

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to inform you about a minor accident happened using your vehicle, which took place yesterday. I have filed a complaint in police station against the culprit.

On 12th February, I had rented a car from the wallstreet, mumbai branch of your company. I requested for a sedan cars as will be along with my family going on 3 days out-station trip. While, returning home, we halted at a restaurant for refreshments, where a biker tried to pass through, between the wall and our vehicle. In this process, he broke the passenger side rearview mirror and flew away.

However, luckily, my wife had noted the bikers license plate number, and lodged a complaint against him in ring road police station. A copy of the car rental and police complaint is enclosed with this letter. The broken rear view mirror has been kept in the cars trunk. I assume, the mirror can be fix using the same handle.

In case, any further information required. Please, feel free to contact me on my mobile number mention in the rental form.

Yours faithfully,
Abhishek Agrawal

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... police station against the culprit. I had rented car from the wallstreet bran...
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Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... of your company on 12th February 2020. I requested for a sedan cars as will be a...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86931818182 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56777324787 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.721590909091 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.088065889 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.9230769231 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5384615385 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.07692307692 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17257993576 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455557556334 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648247737337 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825337093357 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065847253965 0.0580467560999 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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