You rented a car from a company and while you were driving on holiday, you had a small accident. You will have to write a letter to the company and in your letter.
Explain when and from where you rented it
Describe how the accident happened
what kind of action did you take after the accident
Dear Joe,
how are you? i hope all are fine at your side after so long i am writing the letter to you to know that there is big music selena gomes concert is happening at your place .
after long time big music concert is going to happen in paris with so many instruments with dance with many orchestra.
Since i have a emergency meeting in japan i have to fly to japan on same date i will definetly miss the event .
i know how much you like selena gomes and thats why i would like you to enjoy the concert. I did not want to disppoint my boss so i have to attend the meeting.
i will give the ticket to Joy who is also going to the concert. and you can meet him prior to the concert to collect it..Do not forget to share your experience with me when i am back from japan.
Yours Truly,
Johny
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
Dear Joe, how are you? i hope all are fine at your side after so...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
Dear Joe, how are you? i hope all are fine at your side after so...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...all are fine at your side after so long i am writing the letter to you to know th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r to you to know that there is big music selena gomes concert is happening at you...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
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...gomes concert is happening at your place . after long time big music concert i...
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...oncert is happening at your place . after long time big music concert is going to...
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Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun orchestra seems to be countable; consider using: 'many orchestras'.
Suggestion: many orchestras
...ith so many instruments with dance with many orchestra. Since i have a emergency meeting in ...
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ruments with dance with many orchestra. Since i have a emergency meeting in japan i h...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nce with many orchestra. Since i have a emergency meeting in japan i have to fl...
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...pan i have to fly to japan on same date i will definetly miss the event . i k...
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...ame date i will definetly miss the event . i know how much you like selena gom...
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...e i will definetly miss the event . i know how much you like selena gomes and...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...e i will definetly miss the event . i know how much you like selena gomes and...
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...know how much you like selena gomes and thats why i would like you to enjoy the conce...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...uch you like selena gomes and thats why i would like you to enjoy the concert. I...
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...oss so i have to attend the meeting. i will give the ticket to Joy who is also...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...oss so i have to attend the meeting. i will give the ticket to Joy who is also...
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...o Joy who is also going to the concert. and you can meet him prior to the concert t...
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Message: Two consecutive dots
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...t him prior to the concert to collect it..Do not forget to share your experience w...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Do
...him prior to the concert to collect it..Do not forget to share your experience wit...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t to share your experience with me when i am back from japan. Yours Truly, ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...en i am back from japan. Yours Truly, Johny
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 653.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.10691823899 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.01732398994 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59748427673 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5471036594 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5555555556 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 4.34317383033 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 2.54639175258 864% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237488594637 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100070320009 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832947007308 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123367888425 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844481235827 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.26 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.47 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.