Dear Rohan,
I hope you are doing well and will do understand the situation that I cannot join you for a movie on coming Friday as I have to go out of town for a business meeting.
I am sorry for canceling such short notice because I got an invitation today for a business meeting in Vancouver with our client and I will be leaving today in the evening to Vancouver. I know that tomorrow we supposed to go to a movie in the Central town cinema but you know work comes first to me and you because it is the only source which gives to earn our bread and butter. Also, it is important for my career because I have to present our newly launched product to one of the biggest clients in the country.
Since I'll be leaving on Thursday, you can take go with my other friend Lucy to a movie. Since she does not have any plans to go out on the coming weekend, I can ask her to come along with you for a movie if you are comfortable.
I know that you will be missing my presence but she is the most amazing person because of her cute and funny nature. You will love her company because you both are foodies and like to watch movies in a cinema instead of seeing movies at home. I hope you understand the situation and after coming back to town, I'll take you to Club for a drink which will be on the house by me.
I look forward to see you soon
Regards,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... for a business meeting. I know that Im canceling our next meetup to go out for...
^^
Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...I have and it is the only reason that I couldnt meet you for the upcoming movie Furious...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 7, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ng movie Furious 9 on Friday. Since Ill be leaving on Thursday, you can take go...
^^^
Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...vie. She would be staying alone because Ill be out of town and you too would not ha...
^^^
Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...too would not have company, so, I think its a great chance for both of you to see e...
^^^
Line 9, column 148, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...y nature. You will love her company and Ill ask her to join for a movie on Friday i...
^^^
Line 14, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...my business trip. Regards, Shwatank
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.17768595041 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23483437112 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528925619835 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.8495358558 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.1 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291825562776 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11909888388 0.0766984524023 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691557494412 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182323609298 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425045851072 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.26 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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