You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for the volunteers to help run a charity event
Write a letter of application to the organizers
In your letter
Explain why you are interested in helping
Give details of suitable past such experience
Suggest ways you might help the event
Respected Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter in response to your recent newspaper advertisement seeking volunteers for a charity event for children suffering from cancer at Boston cancer hospital. I would like to inform you that charity events like this are very close to my heart. More so after, personally witnessing the pain of a cancer patient during my nephew’s traumatic lung cancer treatment and recovery. It makes me passionate to work for such cause with courage and empathy.
Let me explain in detail, as to how I got to work with Boston Cancer Hospital before and how I have been involved in similar events in the past. As mentioned previously, I got to understand the role played by these hardworking charitable organizations to provide financial aid and better medical facilities. This motivated me to help and volunteer for such events. I joined them by helping to organize the event and also in my professional capacity as a photographer before and during the event. I have done that for more than 15 such events now.
Would you kindly consider me as a volunteer for the aforesaid event and include me as an active member in arrangement committee as well as an event photographer if the need be. I would be available for the weekends as well as 2 hours on weekdays till the day of the event.
Thank you for your consideration
Yours faithfully
Seema
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91525423729 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87171867878 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584745762712 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8980657422 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205508286171 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804856114348 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595660413561 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12135500088 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793711879933 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.