You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event.Write a letter of application to the organisers. In your letter:•Eplain why you are interested in helping•give details suitable past experience•suggest ways you mig

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 7, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...tient in there bad situation. It is near by my home so that there will be no diffic...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 42, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...urrently, I am the only one to complete a open heart surgery in my college so wor...
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Line 6, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be great for me. Nevertheless, I am also good at first aid treatment even though ...
^^
Line 6, column 201, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...good at first aid treatment even though Im still pursuing my medical studies. ...
^^
Line 8, column 32, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ies. My identification proof will be submitted while joining. Advert states ...
^^
Line 8, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly from the second week of may. However, if you agree with my joining date Im gen...
^^
Line 8, column 227, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ver, if you agree with my joining date Im generous to serve your hospital during ...
^^
Line 10, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... my free time without wages. Regards Revanth
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 722.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59872611465 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.681763156 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656050955414 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6007668621 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2222222222 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 4.34317383033 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0447410990768 0.216113520407 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0191854796034 0.0766984524023 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306537640171 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0259138818821 0.12726935374 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202533727627 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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