You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains.
You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up.
Write to the tour operator. In your letter:
• Explain why you're interested in the tour.
• Ask for information about dates and prices.
• Express your concerns about your fitness level.
Respected Sir,
I am writing this letter with a mixed feeling of excitement and worries at the same time. First of all, I would like to appreciate the whole plan as I was waiting for such plan which covers both health and adventure areas of a person’s interest. I am fond of hiking and traveling through mountains and this tour of yours seems best to achieve my craving of mountain expedition.
Considering the duration of the plan, i.e. one week, I must have to make arrangements at my end. Just to make sure that I must not miss this opportunity, I would like you to inform me about dates of this venture. In addition to this, please share the cost of this whole endeavor so that I can manage my ends.
In the end, I would like to share the point which is bothering me, i.e. my weight and breathing issue. I am a bit over weight and this thing impacts on my breathing as well. I want to know the exact length of that we will cover by walking through these mountains and the way forward as if we have to walk continuously or there will be stopovers to get your breath during the walk?
Your apt response in this regard will help me in taking decision accordingly. Hope to get a positive reply soon.
Yours truly,
John.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, if, so, well, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38864628821 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48702895408 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606986899563 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.673800847 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.75 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0898737689356 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297331322011 0.0766984524023 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0246779406926 0.0603063233224 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0483921766032 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132268138923 0.0580467560999 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.