You share a parking area with several neighbors and have recently started having problems Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area In that letter 1 Explain the problems 2 Suggest ways to help the situation 3 Propose a meet

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You share a parking area with several neighbors and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter:
1. Explain the problems
2. Suggest ways to help the situation
3. Propose a meeting

Dear Neighbors,

Hope you all are good! I am writing this letter to share of the parking problem we I am facing since last month.

Actually, these days I am getting late in the office, as I have to complete some time bound assignment. I usually reach the home late at 10 pm, and when I come I see that no vacant space is available in the parking area as it was fully occupied, may be some of us are having two vehicles or some are having guest visited to them.
I suggest that name plate of the flat is to be painted by dividing the parking area, which will make it clear to all that where they have to park the vehicle, and if somebody have to park the extra car then it should be done outside at road or in the guest parking area which is located near community hall. Moreover, the guard should be provided the vehicle number of the car of all the residents so that he can guide the guest where they have to park when they visit.
I have also planned a get together in this regards on next Sunday, in the evening at 4 pm. I think it will be convenient to all and everybody will be free at that time. So that suggestions of other to solve the issue can be taken and nobody have to face this situation in future.
Hope that time will be suitable to all.

Yours sincerely,
Maninder Vadhrah
Flat no 111B

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 176, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'somebody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ve to park the vehicle, and if somebody have to park the extra car then it should be...
^^^^
Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... I have also planned a get together in this regards on next Sunday, in the evening ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'nobody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...solve the issue can be taken and nobody have to face this situation in future. Hope...
^^^^
Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... and nobody have to face this situation in future. Hope that time will be suitable to al...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, may, moreover, so, then, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.03092783505 429% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 254.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.1968503937 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17478262347 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555118110236 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.6453431552 44.8134815571 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 16.8248392259 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316449930858 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108168234735 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784983913286 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162356698955 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693746296245 0.0580467560999 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.38 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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