You share a parking area with several neighbors and have recently started having problems.Write a letter to be copied to all neighbors that share the parking area. In that letter• explaining the problems• suggesting ways to help the situation• propo

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You share a parking area with several neighbors and have recently started having problems.
Write a letter to be copied to all neighbors that share the parking area. In that letter
• explaining the problems
• suggesting ways to help the situation
• proposing a possible meeting

Dear neighbors,

I hope you all are doing well. I am writing to take your attention that I recently start figuring some new problems in the parking area that I have been shared with you. Which is that some of you leave the light open, which cause an increase in the electricity bill. As well as the place stat to be dirty.

I suggest that Firstly, anyone come in or out of the parking to check the lights and please close it if it was open. Secondly, let us put the garbage on its correct wastebasket which you will find it in the corner writ to the entry gate. I will appreciate your care a lot.

I want to arrange the earliest meeting if you please in order to solve this dilemma. In other words, we should try to do our best to keep the parking as nice as possible.

I look forward to receiving your response at your earliest convenience.
yours faithfully
Doaa.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear neighbors, I hope you all are doing well. I am writ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...esponse at your earliest convenience. yours faithfully Doaa.
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...earliest convenience. yours faithfully Doaa.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, as well as, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38414634146 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3461826806 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670731707317 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3088223234 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.3636363636 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 4.34317383033 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190034538926 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578157446559 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872616264665 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918467978697 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906898178365 0.0580467560999 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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