You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course.
Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter,
* describe what you enjoyed about the course
* say how much cooking you've done since the course
* suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to give the feedback on the course that I have recently completed from your training center which is located in Downtown.
I would like to thank you for allowing me to enrol in the class on such a short notice. Although I am a novice participant in cooking, joining the batch helped me to learn basic techniques and ways for preparing food. The most amazing part of the lecture was to cook lunches for Orphanage homes, usually on Wednesdays, and dispatch them by ourselves.
I have been continuing this practice with my close acquaintances on weekends, and we collect old clothes for charity in distinct old age homes. In addition, I registered a non-profit charity organisation on my name so that more people like me could join who love to cook for such cause.
I would really appreciate it if you could commence the new class for Chinese cuisine which will help us to serve these communities in the sub-urban area of the town. Perhaps, I could also help to ask some of my friends to register for this class.
I look forward to hearing from you soon at your earliest convenience.
Yours Faithfully,
Apoorva Chikara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 71, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you soon at your earliest convenience. Yours Faithfully, Apoorva Chikara
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80099502488 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71198588746 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65671641791 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.7460427526 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171599102415 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672054249423 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446706839541 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967275717635 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428461536863 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.