You recently travelled by plane. While you were at the airport, a member of staff helped you with a problem, and now you would like to show him/her your appreciation. Write a letter to the manager of the airport. In your letter
* explain what the problem was
* say how the member of staff helped you
* say what you would like the manager to do to reward the member of staff
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to recognise the services that your staff has been providing to the flyers at the airport.
Last month, I needed to travel from Chicago to New York for a dire official meeting with the big-brand client. Although I had booked the ticket in advance, the flight was canceled due to the bad weather condition. Also, most passengers were satisfied to take the next available airplane.
Because of the urgency, Mr. Aman Sood, at the airport counter assisted me to arrange a better way to reach New York. He booked the flight ticket from Detroit to New York and helped me to hire a taxi from Chicago.
I am pleased to use the services from your elite company. I am attaching a shopping coupon to this email and requesting you to forward this to him. I would be happy if you could also reward him with a new Airpods Pro that could be a great gift to him.
I hope that you would continue such services to all customers.
Yours Faithfully,
Apoorva Chikara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 149, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... requesting you to forward this to him. I would be happy if you could also reward...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o that could be a great gift to him. I hope that you would continue such servi...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62711864407 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44508129677 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632768361582 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4071740816 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.4545454545 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219363347419 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733302938427 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484373085018 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115773945443 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576328877791 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.