A friend wants to spend a four-week holiday in your country and has written asking for advice about the trip. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: offer to find somewhere to stay, give advice about what to do, give information about what clothes to bring.
Dear John,
I was absolutely delighted that you are finally able to come to India and visit Delhi in November. Winters are the best time to visit here because it is too hot in summer to explore the city, but the nights are cooler so bring jump suites.
I hope that you can spend a couple of days with us but I also recommend that you can stay at the city center hotel 'Taj palace', so you can do shopping in the local market and enjoy the nightlife and the museum displays the great history of Indian culture.
It will be good if you spare some time to visit the recently renovated park in the outskirts of the city. While you are there it will be worth booking a night safari. I will be working during the week but I hope you can agree to join us on the weekend for a trip to a nearby Hill station for 2 days.
Hope to see you soon!
With love,
Apoorva Chikara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ated park in the outskirts of the city. While you are there it will be worth booking ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.15882352941 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.01589702873 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0838800597 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0332974090381 0.216113520407 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0136288040212 0.0766984524023 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.023360374429 0.0603063233224 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0167851984711 0.12726935374 13% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168968906193 0.0580467560999 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.14 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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