You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbor.
Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbor to come
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Donna,
My name is Joshua and am your new neighbor who recently moved in to house number 35. I work as a manager for an engineering services company located in our city.
Main reason for writing today is to inform you of our plans about future house party which is going to be held on Friday evening starting shortly after seven. As it is my son's sixth annual birthday, we have arranged his celebration in our backyard along with flood lighting and a live band to play melodic music throughout. Dusk will be filled with fun and frolic games like Hide and Seek, Water cannon and Lucky dips as preplanned. Free beverages and food available to everyone on that night to quench your hunger and thirst.
I am heartfully inviting you to join us in our euphoria and you will get a chance to meet all of my kith and kin. I would also like to convey my apologies to your family for any disturbances during our gathering from songs and loud chatter.
Yours Friendly,
Joshua James
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56741573034 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35613048016 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707865168539 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.358284955 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3333333333 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 4.34317383033 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204898612484 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800039059124 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585362763549 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123598768554 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114168987033 0.0580467560999 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.