You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
We all know about hundreds of famed people around the world and they are movie actors, politicians, sports men, businessmen etc. Their fame reached our ears only through media. It is also true that we like some of them and we don't like some of them spontaneously after reading the news. Let us discuss the pivotal role of media in making them famous or infamous.
Firstly, magazine publishers are sometimes detrimental to them as editors want to attract more readers by publishing their personal lives by highlighting things like politicians never fulfilled their election promises but attending alcohol parties, Hollywood stars are on a dope spree while marijuana consumption is legal, police commissioner's brutality killed youth while in reality that young man attacked them and got killed in a gun fire exchange. Another recent outburst in America was to blame US President for not providing enough toilet paper during Pandemic lockdown where no one could help in this situation as factories were shut down to prevent COVID-19 virus spread.
Secondly, publicity is a boon to many who are professionally growing like artists and manufacturers. An example of this is, we often see brand ambassador like Jean Claude Van Damme promoting Mercedes Benz trucks which is a multi-billion dollar industry. The TV advert looks appealing and hence consumers will go for that vehicle in the market. Instead, if they portray a negative impression on this guy by writing or airing negative remarks like this person is not handsome or a criminal because reporters saw him hanging around in a drug zone, sales will plummet and companies will go bankrupt. Such is the aftermath of negative propaganda and besides there is no evidence that he is involved in any cognizable offences.
To conclude, from above, we understood that press should always print real matter only and never pressurize them. They can avoid eavesdropping and intruding into their personal lives so that they can perform much better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...o true that we like some of them and we dont like some of them spontaneously after r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17283950617 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73779872126 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.700617283951 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 101.99709939 49.4020404114 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 128.923076923 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0900200612805 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0264660169617 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0205735499498 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0475760296788 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198788377621 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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