You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter
describe a news story in your country
explain why people are interested in it
say how the story personally relates to you
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ...,
You should write at least 150 words.
Hi Jane,
I hope you are doing well. I know you heard about biggest news ever going on these days in my hometown.
I got your message on Facebook related to this news. But, I am sorry I couldn't reply for it as I was stuck somewhere. This is about the protest which is going on in Delhi by farmers to demolish the new bill with respect to food market. The government is pretending it's just nothing, however, it became the largest protest ever in history.
Before, it was started by Punjabi community but soon they found support from everywhere in the world. One and one reason of pupil's interest in it is the main logo which is "no farmer no food" .
Since I belong to a farmer family, this is my own story to pull this bill out of jury so that we all farmers can make sure to provide food at reasonable cost for everyone and authorities can not sell it at higher rates just for money.
I hope now you can understand the situation and will support us.
Hoping to hear from you soon
Shahnaj.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 45, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the biggest'.
Suggestion: about the biggest
...pe you are doing well. I know you heard about biggest news ever going on these days in my hom...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...related to this news. But, I am sorry I couldnt reply for it as I was stuck somewhere. ...
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Line 4, column 201, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...o which is 'no farmer no food' . Since I belong to a farmer family, thi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, well, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35638297872 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31660248432 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654255319149 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6227804738 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4545454545 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14002078511 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594302196691 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809279515383 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687703454733 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525935625389 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.