You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter
describe a news story in your country
explain why people are interested in it
say how the story personally relates to you
Dear Nancy,
I just got your question about the news in my country from Facebook comment. I was thinking I could write a letter to explain everything to you.
Yes! We have another baby panda and her name is Judy. She was born one month ago in the National Panda Zoo. Her mum is Lucy who visited your country 10 years ago. I remember you told me about that before. This has been the first baby panda since 2018 so everybody is so excited to see her. I went to the zoo last year and visited Lucy. She is so cute and elegent. I feel she is like a friend to me. I watched the live delivering video and it was so emtional when I saw Judy finally came out after 2 hours' processing.
I hope you could come and visit them this summer. I can be you tour guide and show you around. I am looking forward hearing from you.
Best Regards,
Sam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ly came out after 2 hours processing. I hope you could come and visit them this...
^
Line 4, column 51, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... could come and visit them this summer. I can be you tour guide and show you arou...
^
Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... be you tour guide and show you around. I am looking forward hearing from you. B...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, look, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 672.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.09756097561 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08036770877 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689024390244 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9270936934 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 44.8 76.5299724578 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.9333333333 16.8248392259 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.13333333333 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219568797737 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595877455388 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798289412158 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173662115627 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138261000038 0.0580467560999 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.3 8.37731958763 39% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 7.45979381443 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.32 8.71597938144 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.