You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
• describe the situation
• explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
• say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to talk about some problems with my roommate and request new arrangement on next month. Lisa - my roommate - she always come room lately while I was trying to sleep early. Sometimes she plays music so loud that I could not focus on my work. It is difficult for me to concentrate on my study when she make noisy. I know we have a share room but it is impolite when she borrows my things without asking me. Lisa and I have different habits so I am afraid that we could not live together.
So I would be grateful if I have a new roommate on next month because I am going to taking important exams and I need quite space for study. It is more convenient if we have in common with interest. If not, I hope you can arrange an another room for me. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
May
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
... me to concentrate on my study when she make noisy. I know we have a share room but ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a room' or 'another room'.
Suggestion: a room; another room
...nterest. If not, I hope you can arrange an another room for me. I am looking forward to hearing...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, while, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 699.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21084337349 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33502580747 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644578313253 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7543385641 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.5454545455 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167572575069 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618429360715 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667110018671 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130739457817 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219882680205 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.