You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter:
Introduce yourself
Explain what is wrong with the furniture
Say what action you would like the landlord to take
Hi Nishant,
Hope you are doing well! My name is Raghav; I am your tennat and residing in flat B-201, Shantiniketan society.
I moved in this flat last month with my family and we all are very much happy with the place and amenities that we got with this new house except one household good. I am writing here to bring one concern in your attention regarding the condition of sofa. Actually, it is a 2 chairs and one master sofa set, chairs are fine but master sofa's spring is broken, hence we can not use it sitting. As sofa is situated in drawing hall and this is the place for welcoming guests and watching TV, and due to the sofa we can not use the hall for either of the purpose.
Therefore, I would request you to please get this sofa spring fix or replace it altogether. As it is must needed furniture and in absance of it we have to use our bedrooms for purposes that I mentioned above.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Thank you.
Your faithfully
Raghav
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have needed' or 'need'?
Suggestion: have needed; need
...or replace it altogether. As it is must needed furniture and in absance of it we have ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, look, regarding, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43169398907 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32314356606 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612021857923 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.2278183816 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1111111111 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150401695109 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689737822647 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477311622983 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777131275277 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159633257976 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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