You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Manager,
As you know, I am doing a course for I can qualified on this specific area of engineer. I completely understand that we are currently passing through in the busiest day for the company with all this situation that we are living now. However, I am extremely exhausted and I would like to ask you to give me one day off for I can organize my life and have time to complete my qualification. Although, I am asking for a day off it will be good for me and for the company which I will improve my knowledge.
I have some suggestions that would help the company flourish but it is important that I have some time to think how we can proceed to achieve the goals of the company. I believe that we can start changing some rules of the company and make a list of the things that need improvement.
Moreover, it is essential that I complete my course which I am studying to get prepared and start to help to improve the company.
Yours sincerely,
Fabricio Fazolare
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'qualify'
Suggestion: qualify
...you know, I am doing a course for I can qualified on this specific area of engineer. I co...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41758241758 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64862521956 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527472527473 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.5965423942 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27884214712 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111884519315 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634210197335 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14287127704 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093684904216 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.