You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have compl

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.

Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter

explain why you are writing

describe your circumstances

ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear

You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir,

I came across your advertisement on Advanced Computer Graphics course and would like to enroll myself for the same. My name is Ritu & I am about to begin my internship as a Graphic Designer

However, i noticed to be able to do the course one must have completed the Certification in Basic Computer Graphics. Although i do not have a formal certification for the same let me assure you that i have the required knowledge & skills. I have self taught myself through video tutorials and have bettered my skills through practice assignments and discussions with other graphic designers via online forums.

I would hereby, request you to let me directly enroll for the advanced course. If required I could sit in for a test on Basic Computer graphics before I start the Advanced course. Your assistance on the said matter will be greatly appreciated.

Thank You

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 10, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hip as a Graphic Designer However, i noticed to be able to do the course one...
^
Line 9, column 127, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...on in Basic Computer Graphics. Although i do not have a formal certification for ...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98648648649 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.815859845 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7399094007 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.428571429 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262470851036 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124001978328 0.0766984524023 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103362455856 0.0603063233224 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140677315621 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941505429853 0.0580467560999 162% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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