You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting.
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to share my experience at Jevnic Restaurant last weekend, during my visit with my family to celebrate my brothers graduation from the university.
My brother graduated from the university after studying medicine and surgery for eight years abroad. I was given the task by my parent, to come up with a perfect place in the city where local cosines are sold at a reasonable prices. I googled and finally decided we should visit Jevnic Restaurant.
I must say, their meals were delicious and tasted like home-made food. Also, the measure and quality of food served was to our satisfaction. We ordered one of the local diets of the yorubas- pounded yam and egusi soup. The cuisine was well cooked as they paid attention to the ingredients used ranging from ponmo, dried fish, beef, panla, chicken, cryfish and so on.
Based on my experience above, I think the place is worth visiting because of the high level of professionalism displayed by the staff, the conducive ambient and the availability of traditional cuisines.
I look forward to further engagement on the proposed publication soon.
Yours faithfully,
James Jones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rothers graduation from the university. My brother graduated from the university...
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Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'prex', 'price'?
Suggestion: prex; price
... local cosines are sold at a reasonable prices. I googled and finally decided we shoul...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ded we should visit Jevnic Restaurant. I must say, their meals were delicious an...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, look, so, well, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04712041885 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78058287563 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.706806282723 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0909915855 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6363636364 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0883710253094 0.216113520407 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278738448894 0.0766984524023 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275519446812 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0393025456485 0.12726935374 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265176526321 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.