You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:• Intr

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.
Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:
• Introduce yourself.
• Explain that you did not buy the items listed.
• Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.
You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you regarding to incorrect transactions in my bank account for two expensive products which I did not buy. My name is David and I am a loyal customer of the CIBB bank. My bank account was opened three years ago which has a number of 1232 and is associated with Nova scotia branch.

Recently, I have noted that statements in the credit card were wrong. As mentioned in the card, I paid 1000$ for a perfume from a local shop in Italy on the last weekend which was impossible since I am allergic to perfume and have never been in Italy. Moreover, another expensive charge of 500$ from a computer dealer yesterday was also wrong since I have not bought any electric equipment recently. Probably, my credit card information was stolen and then was used to purchase these products.

Therefore, I suggest that you should freeze or cancel my credit card immediately and also help me to report these problems to the police. Could you also help me to contact to their sellers to check for the detail transactions and also asked them to refund my money for their products?
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely,
David

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 104, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$1000'.
Suggestion: $1000
...wrong. As mentioned in the card, I paid 1000$ for a perfume from a local shop in Ital...
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Line 4, column 291, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$500'.
Suggestion: $500
.... Moreover, another expensive charge of 500$ from a computer dealer yesterday was al...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63157894737 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51675550783 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602870813397 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7206576242 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224134640272 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088840744138 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492494077606 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136222586869 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234429619834 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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