You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.
In the letter:
* explain why you were at the restaurant
* describe the problems
* write about the action you want the manager to take
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam,
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my disappointment with your services. I am a regular customer and have been very annoyed with my recent experience at your restaurant, The Italian House, in South Mumbai.
I was at the restaurant to celebrate my first wedding anniversary with my husband. We have been regular customers and thoroughly enjoy your Italian cuisine. The branch at South Mumbai is where he proposed to me, and hence I picked this place once again to make it a memorable experience. Unfortunately, it turned out to be a disaster.
Firstly, on our arrival, the restaurant looked fairly busy and there was no one to assist us. Despite a prior reservation for a candlelit dinner at the rooftop, and a special request for a cake, nothing was arranged. Secondly, after much struggle, we were asked to accommodate ourselves at the indoor section of the restaurant which was noisy and overcrowded.
Moreover, the loud chatter made it extremely difficult to even converse with each other. The staff seemed laid back and uninterested to serve us. In addition, our favorite dish, 'Penne Arabiata' was unavailable. Overall it was a traumatic evening.
I recommend you to take the necessary measure to ensure satisfaction to your customers. I suggest you employ more staff members so that the restaurant is well-managed. I expect you to give me a discounted voucher for my next visit, to redeem yourself for the inconvenience caused to us. I hope you will do the needful and live up to your dinners true reputation.
Hoping for a quick and favorable response.
Yours sincerely,
Mrs. Nadar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... The Italian House, in South Mumbai. I was at the restaurant to celebrate my f...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urant which was noisy and overcrowded. Moreover, the loud chatter made it extre...
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Line 11, column 169, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...so that the restaurant is well-managed. I expect you to give me a discounted vouc...
^
Line 11, column 289, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lf for the inconvenience caused to us. I hope you will do the needful and live u...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 937.175257732 145% => OK
No of words: 269.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03717472119 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97211372814 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 127.690721649 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635687732342 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 290.88556701 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5371791043 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3157894737 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1578947368 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31578947368 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191426795521 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493132288332 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515982573531 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783680866137 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753424111168 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 41.2886597938 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.