You stayed at your friend’s house when you attended a conference in Australia. Unfortunately, you left a large envelope with some important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter:
thank your friend for the stay
describe where you left the envelope
ask him/her to return it to you by post
Begin your letter as follows: Dear _________
It was my great pleasure staying at your place. We shared a good time together after long and this recreated our friendship to another level.
Thanks a lot for your time and making my stay so lively and enjoyable in Australia.
Actually, while unpacking my bag, I saw that it was missing an important envelope. On further recalling, I realised that I have left that large envelope in your house itself. I kept it on the side table of the bed, in your room.
I would be thankful to you if you could post that envelope at the earliest to my Mumbai address. I would need that for one of my crucial presentation in my office latest by thursday (3rd Aug), which is 2 days from today.
Could you please speed post that envelop to me.
I will be sincerely grateful for your help !
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e side table of the bed, in your room. I would be thankful to you if you could ...
^^^^
Line 6, column 98, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e at the earliest to my Mumbai address. I would need that for one of my crucial p...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 640.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 144.0 206.0 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44444444444 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43230341057 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680555555556 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 192.6 290.88556701 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.0161947546 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.0 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29369509731 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119037293005 0.0766984524023 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744815769424 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14295803564 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403006391196 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.