To get a good job today it is more important for children to study mathematics and foreign languages than art and music. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">As far as a good job is considered, this can be directly linked to maths and other languages. Maths is utmost important and brings logical and reasoning sense in a person. The other required skill these days is language proficiency, mostly foreign languages. This is perhaps is the added competency searched for, in turn resulting in added packages.
The more you know the language, more is your outshined resume. Hence, I truly agree on the high need for learning maths and literature languages, yes of course for better employment opportunities.
But the question here is not being thorough in languages and maths, the superset of this whole argument is whether a person wants to live his dreams or crave for a settled job for the whole life. Well, if its just the employment option to be considered, then no doubt, mathematics indeed plays a significant impact but if success matters, an artist wins the game.
Artists stature to a higher level of dignity as well as prosperity and this automatically bring a sense of entrepreneurship to one's career path.
Most importantly, what adds value is the interest factor. Wherever you go, if you are willing and desiring for it, then success for sure follows you. Perseverance, determination and desire matters to hit the shot. A person can do wonders by just learning a single language and reach on the peak.
Getting flown with practical scenarios of job and learning some foreign language just to mark the trend is prone to create complications.
The question will not remain whether studying maths and literature brings employment to your way or honing skills like art and music. I would conclude by saying "desire is the only dragging force, read inner self and understand more to create the most successful path for yourself".</span><br>
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, well, no doubt, of course, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16611295681 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28825454645 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611295681063 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8148822191 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1875 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26108337869 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700749024555 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401053464692 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107997989576 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386899383211 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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