You stayed at your friends’ house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room.
Write a letter to your friend,
describing the file and
ask him/her to return it to you by post.
Dear John,
First of all, I'm sorry that I haven't written to you after returning home. My work has kept me so busy that I couldn't find time to write or call you.
By the way, I hope you are doing good there. I'm writing this letter to request you to return the file that I forgot in my room at your home.
While submitting documents related to the seminar, I realized that the whole file was forgotten by me at your home only. Actually, on the last day I was in hurry to reach the airport on time, so
I packed my luggage in a way that I left this file. All documents were kept in the black colored business file and I vividly remember that I saw it last time in the drawer of the cupboard in the room where I stayed.
All documents in that file are very confidential and very important for me to submit to the human resources department. I request you to post the file on my residential
address by post which I think is the safest way to get it on time. I understand this is an extra burden from my side and I'm ready to pay for all the expenses for the same.
Thanking you in advance.
Best regards,
Emma
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-10-06 | mohammed123 | 70 | view |
| 2021-10-06 | mohammed123 | 100 | view |
| 2020-10-10 | nirav9971 | 88 | view |
| 2020-05-07 | kjot_59 | 70 | view |
- Some people say that team sports are more beneficial than individual sports What are the benefits of playing in a team How can it help later in life 61
- nowadays advances in technology and translation software people no longer need to learn new languages to communicate to what extend do you agree or disagree with the statement 73
- People live longer today and so people should stay in the workforce longer.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- You experienced an incident on public transport that caused you distress Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company In your letter describe the incident explain how this incident affected you suggest what could be done about it 92
- Write a letter to your friend who is residing in other country Invite your friend to public event Invite him Describe the event Share other plans too 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear John, First of all, Im sorry that I havent written to you afte...
^^
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
... John, First of all, Im sorry that I havent written to you after returning home. My...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ome. My work has kept me so busy that I couldnt find time to write or call you. By th...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 46, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...e way, I hope you are doing good there. Im writing this letter to request you to r...
^^
Line 6, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n hurry to reach the airport on time, so I packed my luggage in a way that I left...
^^^
Line 9, column 99, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
...important for me to submit to the human resources department. I request you to post the f...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 122, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...his is an extra burden from my side and Im ready to pay for all the expenses for t...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, so, while, as for, i think, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.16055045872 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26741499882 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550458715596 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9344726925 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5833333333 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327116647267 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124442343595 0.0766984524023 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094159252895 0.0603063233224 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170083977793 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994241668972 0.0580467560999 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.