Dear Jackson,
How are you? I hope you are well, What about your job, I think everything is good at your workplace. I hope all the family members are fine. Last week, when I came to your home, did I left any document at your place.
Actually, I lost my document which is very important to me for the upcoming seminar, that is the only hard copy that I was having with me, I did not save the soft copy to my laptop. In this regard, if you find the document please kindly send me for which I will ever be thankful to you.
I think that I have left my file at your home, I am not sure about that. But, I do remember that I have kept my document at the tea table for you to identify my document the colour of the wrapper is blue, there was a logo at the front called "Nirmala" and there was a scratch below of the logo.
thanking you,
Yours lovingly,
Arbaz
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thanking
...there was a scratch below of the logo. thanking you, Yours lovingly, Arbaz
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 700.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.09356725146 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35193889499 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590643274854 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0551522902 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7777777778 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337711921496 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154545810267 0.0766984524023 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853460620727 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209587909318 0.12726935374 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084061029077 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.44 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.33 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.