You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting a solution.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Leonardo Gomes and I have recently passed a job interview for the Software Engineer position at the Software Infrastructure group. I was expected to start on November 15, as agreed, and am writing because, unfortunately, I will not be able to present myself on that date.
During the interview I estimated fifteen days as the amount of time needed for me to finish my activities at my current job and start at your company, but due to fact that I got sick for the last whole week and was not able to work, I could not finish my tasks and will need another week to do so. If necessary, I can give you a copy of a letter from my doctor informing that I had to stay at home and under medical care during that week.
I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience and hope this will not affect our relationship. If I am expected to present any other form of proof or talk to someone else in the company, please let me know.
Faithfully yours,
Leonardo
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 192, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...to start on November 15, as agreed, and am writing because, unfortunately, I will ...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.198979591837 0.220444632235 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.173469387755 0.167888034529 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0612244897959 0.0606518309736 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0459183673469 0.0506257000042 91% => OK
Pronouns: 0.112244897959 0.118615021944 95% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127551020408 0.107062808482 119% => OK
Participles: 0.0357142857143 0.041066498444 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68219437526 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0459183673469 0.0385302599488 119% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0765306122449 0.0714148451538 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0255102040816 0.0191574576366 133% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00930345855455 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 969.0 1141.60824742 85% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.134020619 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38333333333 5.53046319177 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78085437643 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.277777777778 0.284621296913 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.2 0.211203875043 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15 0.133321485273 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0777777777778 0.0843313296314 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68219437526 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.622163163488 98% => OK
Word variations: 57.3148152409 62.8969750728 91% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 12.9587628866 54% => OK
Sentence length: 25.7142857143 16.4300151701 157% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.8747625488 44.7399317507 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.428571429 90.9928171075 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 16.4300151701 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.613754768223 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 45.7142857143 37.5504026743 122% => OK
Elegance: 1.09230769231 1.13073093955 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288148188807 0.331212695627 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0958995243688 0.0927372745006 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.105893164349 0.0736520305886 144% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.653616585423 0.579516596996 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122355364996 0.180689518051 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11905243081 0.122183219658 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963127550436 0.0765303033291 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.263555999211 0.211926503985 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0232311825955 0.0737400523855 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191440654478 0.203819188451 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685653684215 0.067151250289 102% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.45360824742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.48453608247 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.0206185567 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 4.73195876289 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 1.03092783505 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.56701030928 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 8.32989690722 72% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.