You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting a solution.

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You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting a solution.

Dear Mr.Johnson

I hope you are doing well.I r attend interview on your company as Junior Research Analyst,on 1st november and I will receive offer letter suggest that I will come to office on november 15 but one day ago I was diagnosed and reported that I was infected by dengue virus. For this reason, I shall not be coming to work on joining date. So its request you to give me a new date for joining work.Doctor suggested rest for 15 days and currently I am hospitalized.I also give doctor certificate and my prescription to you when I come to office for approve my new date of joining. I hope you will understand my situation and offer me a new letter from your company with new attend date.I assure you that if I am feeling well before that I will join workplace as early as possible.

Thanking you in advance for listening of my situation.

yours faithfully,

Kaushik Suhagiya

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...Mr.Johnson I hope you are doing well.I r attend interview on your company as J...
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... your company as Junior Research Analyst,on 1st november and I will receive offer l...
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... to give me a new date for joining work.Doctor suggested rest for 15 days and currentl...
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...15 days and currently I am hospitalized.I also give doctor certificate and my pre...
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... offer me a new letter from your company with new attend date.I assure you that i...
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...from your company with new attend date.I assure you that if I am feeling well be...
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...from your company with new attend date.I assure you that if I am feeling well be...
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Suggestion: Yours
...ce for listening of my situation. yours faithfully, Kaushik Suhagiya
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...of my situation. yours faithfully, Kaushik Suhagiya
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59375 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72259067801 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61875 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.1285641085 44.8134815571 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 122.5 76.5299724578 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 16.8248392259 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330614614897 0.216113520407 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160918441289 0.0766984524023 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672052455179 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222100789147 0.12726935374 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845810014081 0.0580467560999 146% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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