You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Write a letter to your boss,
-Explaining your situation.
-Expressing your concern.
-Suggesting a solution.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing with regard to the time of beginning my job which was supposed to be on Nov. 15th, however, I cannot be present in the mentioned time, unfortunately.
Unluckily, I caught a cold yesterday, and as it is a contagious disease, the doctor advised me to stay at home so as to protect not only yourself but also your colleagues. So, I had better postpone my presence to the next week, on Monday, the 20th of November.
Frankly, causing a delay in my assignment, I am too worried about my coworkers whose tasks cannot progress until my job gets finished in the engineering department. Consequently, the hold-up will spread among all disciplines.
As a suggestion, I believe that I can start my work from home, and the assignment could be done remotely. In case of any ambiguity, an online meeting could be held in order to provide clarification. As a result, all tasks will be carried out without any postponement.
You are kindly requested to accept my apology for the inconvenience.
Yours faithfully.
Sasan Ghomi
- The charts below show how selected age groups purchased concert, cinema, and theater tickets online over the first three months of 2006 in three countries and how the Internet was accessed.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feat 80
- It is important for travelers and business people to understand the cultures they come into contact with, however briefly. What are the main advantages of doing so? What do you think is the main disadvantage of not doing so? 70
- When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 78
- The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors-agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services-to the UK economy in the twentieth century.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons 70
- The take below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
..., the doctor advised me to stay at home so as to protect not only yourself but also your...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nience. Yours faithfully. Sasan Ghomi
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, frankly, however, if, so, as to, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06616340476 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.705555555556 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5924260655 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 4.34317383033 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137114766888 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525983393996 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05452788179 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0608395521233 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225788986197 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.