You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Write a letter to your boss,
-Explaining your situation.
-Expressing your concern.
-Suggesting a solution.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing with regard to the time of beginning my job which was supposed to be on Nov. 15th, however, I cannot be present in the mentioned time, unfortunately.
Unluckily, I caught a cold yesterday, and as it is a contagious disease, the doctor advised me to stay at home so as to protect not only yourself but also your colleagues. So, I had better postpone my presence to the next week, on Monday, the 20th of November.
Frankly, causing a delay in my assignment, I am too worried about my coworkers whose tasks cannot progress until my job gets finished in the engineering department. Consequently, the hold-up will spread among all disciplines.
As a suggestion, I believe that I can start my work from home, and the assignment could be done remotely. In case of any ambiguity, an online meeting could be held in order to provide clarification. As a result, all tasks will be carried out without any postponement.
You are kindly requested to accept my apology for the inconvenience.
Yours faithfully.
Sasan Ghomi
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
..., the doctor advised me to stay at home so as to protect not only yourself but also your...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nience. Yours faithfully. Sasan Ghomi
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, frankly, however, if, so, as to, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06616340476 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.705555555556 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5924260655 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 4.34317383033 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137114766888 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525983393996 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05452788179 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0608395521233 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225788986197 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.