You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.
In the letter:
explain why you were at the restaurant (what event)
describe the problems (the problem)
write about the action you want the manager to take
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the meal that my family had at your restaurant last Sunday, October 7. On that day we were celebrating my daughter's birthday in the circle of both relatives and close friends.
My family has been visiting your restaurant for two years, because the menu includes a great variety of cousins. My daughter has always liked the apple ice-cream cake, so two days before this occasion, I wanted to order it for her. However, the waiters informed me that the chef was sick and would not be able to prepare it, so they suggested me to replace it with the orange one. Although it was not her favorite cake, I decided to purchase it, because I did not want to disappoint her. Oh her birthday, my family and friends arrived to your restaurant, and everything went as expected, but as soon as we tasted the cake, we felt the small of rotten eggs. It was so disgusting that my daughter burst into crying. Fortunately, my wife calmed her down quickly, since we did not want to irritate the other guests in the neighboring tables. I called for the manager immediately, but the waiters explained me that he was on vacation and would be available in seven days.
I think that you understand that the stale cake ruined my daughter's celebration and that I want to you to compensate it with either a full refund or something else. Otherwise, I would have to address to the authority for help.
Yours faithfully,
Tolegen
- Some people believe that tourists should accept social and environmental responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- Today, majority of children are raised by their grandparents. To what extent do you think it affects the whole family? 11
- The younger generation is mainly responsible for latest technological developments How far do you agree 84
- With a growing population, many people believe that we should focus on more genetically modified foods. What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this? 61
- Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time.Discuss both views and state your opinion. 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 53.0 32.9175257732 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 260.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71923076923 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69010899231 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588461538462 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 377.1 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.5156117182 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3846153846 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134345842817 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451294314743 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461604459726 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105359253843 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323294326491 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.