You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.
In the letter:
explain why you were at the restaurant (what event)
describe the problems (the problem)
write about the action you want the manager to take
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the meal that my family had at your restaurant last Sunday, October 7. On that day we were celebrating my daughter's birthday in the circle of both relatives and close friends.
My family has been visiting your restaurant for two years, as the menu includes a great variety of cousins. My daughter has always liked the apple ice-cream cake, so two days before this occasion, I wanted to order it for her. However, the waiters informed me that the chef was sick and would not be able to prepare it, so they suggested me to replace it with the orange one. It was not her favorite cake, yet I decided to purchase it, because the absence of it could disappoint her. Oh her birthday, my family and friends arrived to your restaurant, and everything went as expected, but as soon as we tasted the cake, we felt the small of rotten eggs. It was so disgusting that my children burst into crying. Fortunately, my wife calmed them down quickly, since the noise might have irritated the other guests in the neighboring tables. I called for the manager immediately, but the waiters explained me that he was on vacation and would be available in seven days.
I think that you understand that the unfresh ingredients in the cake ruined my daughter's celebration. You are fortunate that we did not suffer from wood poisoning. Anyway, I would like you to compensate it with either a full refund or something else. Otherwise, I would have to address to the authority for help.
Yours faithfully,
Tolegen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, however, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 32.9175257732 164% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 937.175257732 139% => OK
No of words: 272.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78308823529 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70675137899 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 127.690721649 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613970588235 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 290.88556701 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2448952505 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7333333333 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150786506984 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048410221214 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414128485845 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111757198809 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332676450127 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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