Dear Sir,
I am your student Rakul in Business Management Course and writing this apology letter for late returning of the Book Corporate governance. Thanks to your kind help I successfully completed my final term exams with distinction and now pursuing Masters in Business Administration. As you are aware, the book I borrowed from you is of limited edition and our library was out of copies. Frankly speaking, when our librarian suggested me to request you for personal copy, I was bit hesitant. However, after knowing your welcoming nature I approached you and requested the text book for which you agreed.
I must say preparing for exams with your book was much easier as language was less complicated and better than other authors. In fact, I was bit advantageous as your notes and references were available at each page which made researching less time consuming. Detailed summary at each end of the chapter helped me to memorise topics in chronological order. Academically your publication is exceptional and unequivocal for pupils planning for post-graduation programmes.
I tried to reach you for returning the book after my exams. Whereas, your neighbours mentioned that you are family vacation and won’t be returning for 15 days. Hence, I retained the book and planned to give it back once you returned. Meanwhile, I became busy for applying further studies and had to shift Mumbai for joining the college. Nevertheless, I am glad that atleast now I got opportunity to return the book to you and once again sorry for not returning intime. Hope you for give me by understanding my situation.
Yours faithfully,
Rakul.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...to request you for personal copy, I was bit hesitant. However, after knowing your w...
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Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...tter than other authors. In fact, I was bit advantageous as your notes and referenc...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
frankly, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, whereas, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 937.175257732 147% => OK
No of words: 269.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12639405204 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96789806086 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617100371747 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 290.88556701 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7490457876 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1875 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423696907228 0.216113520407 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150341464108 0.0766984524023 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103251945221 0.0603063233224 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292322095693 0.12726935374 230% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116167193949 0.0580467560999 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 41.2886597938 203% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.