You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.
In the letter:
explain why you were at the restaurant
describe the problems
write about the action you want the manager to take
Dear Sir,
I am reaching out to you with regard to my recent visit on Saturday to your restaurant Orchid Blue.
I, alongwith my family, wanted to celebrate my brother's promotion and we chose Orchid Blue for this special occassion. However, I would like to inform you that my experience was less than satisfactory.
I and my family were thoroughly disappointed with the level of service we received. We ordered 2 chicken appetizers, a soup and a maincourse that was a mix of seafood, meat and vegetable. Although the food arrived faster than we expected, it was not up to the mark.
The chicken was overcooked and we had to request our waiter to replace it. In addition, the soup was extremely watery and tepid. The maincourse was also average. This is unlike the delectable food we have had at your restaurant before. The staff also looked hassled and rushed.
While I understand that there was a weekend rush the day we visited, the previous meals we have ordered have always been of the highest standard.
Since I have always enjoyed the restaurant's mesmerizing ambiance and delightful service, I would like you to take this as constructive feedback from a concerned customer. I request you to please look into the matter and prepare your kitchen and wait staff better for busy days.
Yours sincerely,
Andrea
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so, while, in addition, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93777777778 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73787878602 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608888888889 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1350936572 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0666666667 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 4.34317383033 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152246250104 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05039111066 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585796159847 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833484545439 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599445509053 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.