You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.
In the letter:
explain why you were at the restaurant
describe the problems
write about the action you want the manager to take
Dear Sir,
I am reaching out to you in regard to my recent visit on Sunday to your Blue Frog restaurant.
I, along with my family, wanted to commemorate my brother's engagement ceremony and we chose to visit your restaurant for this special occasion. Unfortunately, we faced a few unsatisfactory incidents during our dinner which I would like to inform you about.
We had ordered a full course dinner which comprised of i.e. starters, appetizers, main course, and deserts. Though the service was quite fast, the quality of food and the presentation were not up to the standards that were expected. The main course was served to us before we could even finish our appetizers. It was cold and when we asked the waiter to change it for us, there was no taste in the replaced dish.
Since it was a weekend, I understand the restaurant was completely packed and the waiters were really occupied in attending every table. As I have always liked the ambiance and the service in your restaurant, I would like to give you constructive feedback as a loyal customer. I request you to look into this matter and prepare your wait staff and the serving staff for such busy days.
Yours sincerely,
Andrew
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: WHICH_COMPRISED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'which comprised' or 'which consisted of' or 'which was composed of'?
Suggestion: which comprised; which consisted of; which was composed of
...t. We had ordered a full course dinner which comprised of i.e. starters, appetizers, main course,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, really, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76923076923 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70532567027 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1247568084 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1818181818 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160646002807 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567870699254 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367127948712 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986337660174 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436078337053 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.