You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course.
You now find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter
describe the situation
explain why you cannot continue at this time
say what action you would like to take
Dear Mr. Kapoor,
I am writing to inform you that I would not be able to the continue part-time Management classes which are conducted in the evening. The reason to discontinue is my inability to focus on my course due to my full-time job as a Marketing head at the H&M clothing store.
In the beginning, when I had enrolled in this course, my job at this store was part-time. The head of the store truly appreciated my efforts and gave me a preferment as a Marketing Head. Hence, this means I have to work full time.
Since, I was happy to have this opportunity, I tried managing my classes along with my full-time job. But later on, I found it difficult as it affected my health and my assignment submissions.
Although I have paid my full fees for this term, I would like to defer my course for the next term. By continuing this course in the next term, it would give me the time to understand how to balance my job with my course. If there is an alternate option, I would like a suggestion from you.
Looking forward to your corporation.
Yours sincerely,
Krimika
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 56, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... inform you that I would not be able to the continue part-time Management classes which are ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... Head. Hence, this means I have to work full time. Since, I was happy to have this oppor...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47208121827 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69508252447 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593908629442 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0862358415 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4166666667 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239256308016 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997177804533 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598435254663 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13671068188 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065581658974 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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