You use trains to reach office but the timetable of the train has been changed recently. Write a letter to railway authorities for the revised timetable, and the train you take to work no longer stops at your station.
In your letter:
introduce yourself
what are the problems caused due to the changes
what you suggest them to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Anne Wong and I live in Shatin. I am writing to you in response to a revision of the railway timetable which has been effective since 1 December 2019.
My office is at Admiralty, so I used to go to work by taking the West Line of the railway, i.e. getting on the train at Shatin Station each morning and getting off at Admiralty Station. However, from 1 December 2019 onwards, the West Line no longer includes Shatin Station, which means I need to take a bus first for 30 minutes to Tai Mo Shan Station, and then get on the train there to go to my office. This has caused my traveling time to increase from 30 minutes to an hour. I think it is not acceptable.
I would be grateful if you could change the timetable so that the West Line includes Shatin Station during peak hours, say 7-9 a.m. and 5-7 p.m.? I think this is more reasonable and will be welcomed by most citizens living in Shatin.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Anne Wong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Anne Wong and I live in Shati...
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Line 17, column 147, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... peak hours, say 7-9 a.m. and 5-7 p.m.? I think this is more reasonable and will ...
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Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ost citizens living in Shatin. I look forward to your reply. Yo...
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Line 29, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to your reply. Yours sincerely, Anne Wong
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46808510638 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34462872089 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627659574468 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1851248317 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249730822085 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807981028659 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768846816373 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122399102366 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048260894964 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.