Some people like to travel outside their country. Others would rather travel to tourist spots in their own country first, before travelling abroad. Which do you prefer to do and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice.
As transportation becomes more convenient, people spend more time traveling abroad for vacation nowadays. However, some people argue that we should visit the hotspots in our home country before going to visit other countries. In my opinion, going out of my own country to visit others would be more preferable.
Firstly, spots popular and famous to foreigners are actually not attractive to me. For example, Cheung Chau, a place which is well known to be able to demonstrate the old style of Hong Kong society, is just an ordinary place with little development for many Hong Kong people like me. Ah Roy Restaurant, which is famous for its egg tart, a local dessert, is also just an ordinary place for Hong Kong people, as we have been eating egg tart since we were young. Therefore, a local place that is special to foreigners is usually considered non-attractive by locals.
On the contrary, by visiting tourist sites in foreign countries, our minds can be broadened and extraordinary experiences can be obtained. For instance, visiting ice-skiing sites in Canada allows us to play ice-skiing which is impossible in Hong Kong. Going to hot spring in Japan in Winters is also another invaluable, marvelous experience that I can never forget. We can also visit the various Manga Museums in Japan which reveal the culture of manga there. As a result, traveling abroad provides us with an opportunity to learn about different cultures and knowledge.
In conclusion, I prefer spending my holiday in other countries rather than in my own country. It is because I treasure the opportunity that I can view more outside of my home country, plus I do not consider the local hotspots appealing to me.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98596491228 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80494660448 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571929824561 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2645548932 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155988552996 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540577577731 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459197222492 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998699138564 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555897778819 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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