You’ve recently found an object and you think that it might be of some historical value. Write a letter to the director of the museum asking for some information on the object. - Give a description of that object.- Tell them where you found it.- Ask for

Dear Sir/Madam,

I, Divya, am writing this letter to get some information regarding the objects which I found nearby to my home a couple of days ago.

In detail, I am a resident of Sholapur, Hyderabad for more than 22 years now. I recently found a few coins in my garden area, which are different from the modern era ones. Hence, I think they are of historical value. Not only were those found, but also a bowl with handles having ancient paintings was found.

Moreover, I have tried to find information about them on the internet. However, I couldn’t get the details about the era of those coins, hence thought of asking you. Is it possible for you to let me know briefly about them because I am thinking to share these valuable things to my near and dear ones.

I am sending you the coins and the bowl along with this letter. Please acknowledge back if they are of historical importance and if they could be exhibited in our local museum.

I highly appreciate your swift response.

Yours faithfully,
Divya Shah

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
Dear Sir/Madam, I, Divya, am writing this letter to get some informa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7032967033 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55363903758 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675824175824 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9103822808 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3333333333 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287982090777 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789525948079 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517854712715 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124602031137 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690412269448 0.0580467560999 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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