You visited a restaurant for a meal.You were served meat(non-veg) instead of vegetarian meal.You are very annoyed at this incident.Complain to the restaurant manager for the same.
In your letter
•explain your annoying experience
•describe the unprofessional attitude of the staff member
•tell what you want the management to do for you
Dear Sir/Madam,
my name is Ada Isong, I was at your restaurant in Golden Valley yesterday. I am writing you this letter to express my annoyance and dissatisfaction with the meal i was served.
I ordered a veggie burger, but surprisingly, I was given a beef burger. The annoying part is that I have already taken a bite from the burger before I realized it was not what I ordered for. this has caused me a great grievance because I am allergic to meat, especially beef.
Even when I was complaining to the waiter about the mix up in what I demanded and what he served me, he showed a lackadaisical attitude. he just stood there with his hands fold and yell for me to get out. that is an uncivilized attitude and very unprofessional. behaviour like that should not be tolerated from any member of the staff.
I want an apology from the waiter for this cruel behaviour and I want the restaurant to cover my allergy treatment.
Yours faithfully
Ada Isong
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir/Madam, my name is Ada Isong, I was at your rest...
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...atisfaction with the meal i was served. I ordered a veggie burger, but surprisin...
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...realized it was not what I ordered for. this has caused me a great grievance because...
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...me, he showed a lackadaisical attitude. he just stood there with his hands fold an...
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... hands fold and yell for me to get out. that is an uncivilized attitude and very unp...
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... allergy treatment. Yours faithfully Ada Isong
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61271676301 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86410206245 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64161849711 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2179046205 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5454545455 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 4.34317383033 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202685269311 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669501918592 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591913325436 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113976463976 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074568610996 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.