You want a book that you cannot find. Later you find it and it is available in a bookstore in another city. Write a letter to the manager of the bookstore. In your letter, you should:
· give details of the book
· say why you need this book
· tell him how you will pay for it.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Ell Green and I have been looking for a book since long and found only reference to your bookshop by my friend. As your bookstore is located in Delhi than my hometown Patiala, therefore, I am writing this letter to order a book from your bookshop.
With regards to the details of the book, I would like to purchase the first edition of the "Power of subconscious mind" written by Dr Murphy. It is one of the popular books written by author and explains some unknown hidden facts about our brain.
As now I am placing this order, I must tell you that I am interested in buying this book because of the research work I am doing as a part of my college assignment. My professor has highly recommended referring to this book for collecting data for my research. Therefore, it is really important for me to get this book.
As far as payment for this order is concerned, I would like to pay by credit card and request you to please share your account details by email or call so that I can pay at the earliest. In case you need further details, please call me at 09876543210 or alternatively you can write to me at ell@gmail.com.
I look forward to confirming this order.
Yours faithfully,
Ell Green
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- In today’s times internet is making it easy to study online from home. Some prefer online courses to study and they think it is better. Others prefer classroom education. Discuss both views and share your opinion. 89
- You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to:explain the reason why you decline the offerexpress your gratitudeexplain why you like your current job very much 78
- Many people believe that it’s better to learn something in a group rather than individually. Do you agree or disagree? 73
- You have recently taken a two day course Write to give your feedback to the course organiser In your letter you should tell the details of the course what you liked or disliked about it suggest some improvements to the course 94
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 252, Rule ID: OR_ALTERNATIVELY[1]
Message: Use simply 'or'.
Suggestion: or
... details, please call me at 09876543210 or alternatively you can write to me at ell@gmail.com. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61674008811 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69870444586 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581497797357 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.3233554052 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2727272727 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277264327842 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09638839806 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547405170411 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126406218894 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061349217739 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.