Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing a letter to complain about the treatment that my daughter and I visited the casualty department in your hospital last weekend.
During this afternoon, my daughter suffered from severe pains in the stomach. Our family doctor was not in his surgery because it was Sunday, so we went to the hospital’s emergency department. My daughter was unwell as she was screaming with pain when we reached the hospital reception. However, the receptionist just told us to sit down and wait.
Over the next four hours, due to my daughter being very unwell, I constantly asked how long it would take for a doctor to see my daughter. Every time I requested the receptionist to call a doctor, but he told me that he was busy with a rude attitude. The type of service I was offered is an example of cruelty and I have been constantly ignored when my child was crying in pain.
I would like to request you to take a step sincerely and try to take the required actions against those who are responsible.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Chris Wong
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67346938776 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6599987787 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663265306122 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8849585352 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2727272727 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278548899479 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916968082461 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0238921903181 0.0603063233224 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126257516539 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321805087351 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.