you were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket and you wish to explain it to the manager of the supermarket. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter
who are you?
Give details about the accident
suggest how the supermarket can avoid similar accidents further.
Dear Manager,
I am writing to bring to your attention an accident which took place at the supermarket due to sheer negligence.
My name is Stuti Walton. I am a regular customer and an easy club member in your store with membership id 12345.
Last week, I visited the store to buy certain groceries, and while I was walking through the bakery section, i slipped on the floor. It was a moment of severe pain and agony for me. I could have badly hurt myself. Upon investigation at the place, I realised that the flooring was wet, and this can be attributed to the carelessness of the cleaner.
Considering the gravity of this incident, I would request you to train the staff to properly manage such activities, and to make sure that spilled water or any liquid is immediately taken care in the premise. Also, it will be of help to place a warning sign board in these cases, so that customers can be aware while passing through the area.
I look forward to see more safety measure in the shop.
Yours faithfully,
Stuti Walton
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Manager, I am writing to bring to your attention ...
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Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in your store with membership id 12345. Last week, I visited the store to buy ce...
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Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...was walking through the bakery section, i slipped on the floor. It was a moment o...
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Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...ng through the area. I look forward to see more safety measure in the shop. Yo...
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Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...asure in the shop. Yours faithfully, Stuti Walton
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63783783784 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57875797534 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675675675676 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5781840385 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119499763031 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342493198527 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454767138434 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0506844779877 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514639891522 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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