The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.
What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?
Internet is one of the most important inventions which have changed the traditional approach of people, especially the blooming way of acquiring information. Whereas, the data available on internet is not always authentic. Let us discuss the reasons and consequences of internet followed by my own recommendations as remedies for solving the same.
First and foremost, the easy accessibility of the internet to everyone is a huge problem, there is not restrain on what kind of content you are posting weather it can be disaster for a society. To illustrate, according to recent news reports, two teenager friends from the United Kingdom left their homes and joined the ISISI in Syria. As, they were influenced by the terrorist group and they were following ISISI’s Twitter account where they used to have conversations with the terrorists. In addition, the security of personal information is also a concern; the increase in online frauds is the perfect example. Even though, government official websites are on the radar of hackers in order to gather personal details of people.
So, it is necessary to take action and combat the problems. Government should restrict the websites which can cause ill effects for humanity. However, government can keep track of the individual who is surfing these kinds of sites to know the motive behind collecting such data .Also, parents have to play a vital role, and they need to monitor the activities of the children. They can also block the dangerous websites which can be done through various soft wares.
To conclude, the internet is an amazing technological innovation that has transformed people’s lives, but not without negative impacts. However, with the right action by individuals and governments, it can be made a safe place for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... blooming way of acquiring information. Whereas, the data available on internet is not ...
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Line 2, column 104, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'restrained'.
Suggestion: restrained
...veryone is a huge problem, there is not restrain on what kind of content you are posting...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... terrorist group and they were following ISISI's Twitter account where they ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...w the motive behind collecting such data .Also, parents have to play a vital role,...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...the motive behind collecting such data .Also, parents have to play a vital role, and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, so, then, whereas, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23448275862 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92974413788 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631034482759 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1102159725 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.428571429 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194486307752 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566823479735 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051486330597 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105893240767 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252692842884 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.