you were on a pleasant trip and had rented a flat from your friend who was on a holiday. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter writ him:
>how you felt about the trip and
>how did you take care of his house in his absence.
Dear Martin,
I hope you reached home safely after your holiday.I really enjoyed the days, in which I stayed there for my trip.
it was the accommodation and places I visited there attracted me well. As I had enough free time to wander around the city, I utilized that opportunity very efficiently. I had a visit to the wax museum, where I could find some amazing works. that was a fascinating experience for me.M oreover, the evening walk through the river was the major attraction of my trip. I never missed that during my vacation.
What is more, other blessing for me was the accommodation you provided. it never gave me a feeling that I am away from my home. I managed to do all the duties you gave me, and that also made me more responsible and active while during the vacation. Your pet dog was actually difficult to handle for first two days, but he adjusted with me and we both made a good relationship after few days.
Thanks for giving me the most memorable days in my life and I hope to visit the place again to have a get together.
Best wishes,
Neenu.
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| 2019-05-17 | Neenu martin | 73 | view |
| 2019-01-20 | nishabhan | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... me was the accommodation you provided. it never gave me a feeling that I am away ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, really, so, well, while, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48730964467 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51964887878 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629441624365 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1134708997 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6666666667 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121350347718 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427943376256 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451184069197 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813230597854 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621349734026 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.