Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?
It is often argued that money does not buy happiness; however, others opine that the paramount way of living a contented life is by possessing huge amount of currency. This essay intends to analyse how luxury attained by money can make a person happy along with some other essential attributes to live a satisfactory life.
Luxury is a by-product of richness. Comfortable and high-end cars, top-notch domestic facilities and state-of-the-art gadgets give a sense of delight and happiness in life. For instance, many lottery winners suddenly find joy in life when they get access to the facilities and also after by being part of affluent community. Eventually, many new prospects in life opened and ushered by enough money. Moreover, many frequent stress faced by normal person such as parking tickets, breakage of phone or getting late to the office are no more the part of their life. Hence they lead a less stressful life as well.
By contrast, fit body and mind are also at the utmost importance of an individual's life. An overweight person can not run for long even if he can afford the most costly shoes in the world. With money, more responsibilities come. To exemplify, a paranoid with higher financial status is a dangerous combination as Pablo Escobar is the perfect example. So having a balanced mind and emotions is necessary at the same time.
To conclude, undoubtedly, money offers top luxurious life but and unfit person physically or mentally can not get all out of that money. So a balanced life is a perfect life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 564, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ice are no more the part of their life. Hence they lead a less stressful life as well...
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...are also at the utmost importance of an individuals life. An overweight person can not run ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93461538462 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80336600299 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2461168304 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264653914848 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079899989936 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643132501461 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161863518079 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656704944617 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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