You will move to a city for work.You know some people who live there.Tell them for help finding accommodationTell them where you would like to liveTell them the type of place you are looking for.

Essay topics:

You will move to a city for work.You know some people who live there.
Tell them for help finding accommodation
Tell them where you would like to live
Tell them the type of place you are looking for.

Dear Sir

I wanted to let you know that I am coming to live in your city and I would like to ask if you can help me with a few things before I arrive and start my job.

First of all,kindly help me in finding a suitable accommodation as we are five members in family.The house should not be neither too big nor small.It should comprises two rooms,kitchen,bathroom and a balcony.As we all know it should be ventilated.

I hope that you would co-operate me fully as you are very amicable and generous.Both we have a very good understanding on each matter as we had been living together at Ludhiana when we are posted on the same place.So now I am in need of your help.I have to shift to Hissar before 31st of December as I have to join on1st January 2018.

Before time is at hand,search out a sweet house in a peaceful area as well as it should be located at the heart of the city.As you know that my eldest son Mehul is in 12th standard,he has to attend the training or coaching classes.Therefore,look for a preferable place that should not be far away.It should be accessible to each and every needful things of daily usages.

At last,again I request you that it is the eleventh hour for searching an accommodation.Although I believe in you that you are the person who never leave anyone in problem.

Yours faithfully

Sandeep

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , kindly
...arrive and start my job. First of all,kindly help me in finding a suitable accommoda...
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Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'suitable accommodation'.
Suggestion: suitable accommodation
... First of all,kindly help me in finding a suitable accommodation as we are five members in family.The ho...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...dation as we are five members in family.The house should not be neither too big no...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... we are five members in family.The house should not be neither too big nor small....
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Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...should not be neither too big nor small.It should comprises two rooms,kitchen,bath...
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Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'comprise'
Suggestion: comprise
... be neither too big nor small.It should comprises two rooms,kitchen,bathroom and a balcon...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , kitchen
... nor small.It should comprises two rooms,kitchen,bathroom and a balcony.As we all know i...
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Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...wo rooms,kitchen,bathroom and a balcony.As we all know it should be ventilated. ...
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Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...wo rooms,kitchen,bathroom and a balcony.As we all know it should be ventilated. ...
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Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... I hope that you would co-operate me fully as you are very amicable and gener...
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Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Both
...y as you are very amicable and generous.Both we have a very good understanding on ea...
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Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...na when we are posted on the same place.So now I am in need of your help.I have to...
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Suggestion: I
... place.So now I am in need of your help.I have to shift to Hissar before 31st of ...
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Line 9, column 23, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , search
... January 2018. Before time is at hand,search out a sweet house in a peaceful area as...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...uld be located at the heart of the city.As you know that my eldest son Mehul is in...
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Line 9, column 181, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , he
... my eldest son Mehul is in 12th standard,he has to attend the training or coaching ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...attend the training or coaching classes.Therefore,look for a preferable place that should...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , look
...e training or coaching classes.Therefore,look for a preferable place that should not ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...rable place that should not be far away.It should be accessible to each and every ...
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Line 11, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , again
...edful things of daily usages. At last,again I request you that it is the eleventh h...
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Line 11, column 72, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...t it is the eleventh hour for searching an accommodation.Although I believe in you that you are ...
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Line 11, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...nth hour for searching an accommodation.Although I believe in you that you are the perso...
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Line 11, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nth hour for searching an accommodation.Although I believe in you that you are the perso...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, therefore, well, as to, you know, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52049180328 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19761179275 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58606557377 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 16.3608247423 244% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.500970399 44.8134815571 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.833333333 76.5299724578 240% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.6666666667 16.8248392259 242% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.1666666667 4.34317383033 303% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 2.54639175258 903% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248761109789 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12341106904 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958584116396 0.0603063233224 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150154826654 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877134205689 0.0580467560999 151% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 8.37731958763 241% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 7.45979381443 221% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 8.54432989691 211% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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