You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there. Ask them for help finding accommodation. Tell them where you would like to live. Tell them the type of place you are looking for.
Dear Mr. Brown
I am writing to let you know that I have found new work in Newcastle and I am going to move there on the beginning of April. I would be grateful if you could help me with renting apartment.
My new office is located in central business district and it is important for me to have easy access to my job. I would like to live in suburb which is good communicated with CBD via public transport because I will not have my car. However, what is more important for me this area has to be safe and have some sports facilities because I am activity person and I am going to go to gym every evening.
I looking for two or three bedroom apartment, townhouse suits me as well. I need to have big balcony or terrace because I am going to invite my friends there and prepare BBQ’s. Main bedroom has to have ensuite and big walk in robe, what it is crucial point for me. I prefer place where is laundry as a separate room, but it is not necessary for me.
Please let me know if you can help me to find place for living to me. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...going to go to gym every evening. I looking for two or three bedroom apartm...
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Line 13, column 36, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'apartment' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'apartments'.
Suggestion: apartments
... I looking for two or three bedroom apartment, townhouse suits me as well. I need to ...
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Line 13, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g to invite my friends there and prepare BBQ's. Main bedroom has to have ens...
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Line 17, column 31, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help me find' instead.
Suggestion: help me find
... me. Please let me know if you can help me to find place for living to me. I look forward ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, well, as to, you know, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23474178404 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33129675624 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582159624413 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2458752146 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247270821555 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976027728582 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681476701104 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178118055581 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800045497523 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.