You will move to Toronto for work. You know some people who live there.Ask them for help finding accommodationTell them where you would like to liveTell them the type of place you are looking for
Dear Rajesh,
I am very happy to let you know that I have got job offer from SMG Hospital, Etobicoke Toronto as nurse but I am not aware of area and accommodation. You been living in Toronto from last five years, you know the about the rents, living conditions. Hence, I am hoping you could help me to find an appropriate place for me and my family.
Our basic requirement is to find a place close to a primary school with easy access to public transport as me and my child would use it daily for commute.
I don't like to share the place with anyone so looking for private place to rent. Ideally, our first choice is an 1BHK apartment or studio flat we can even settle for a small house or basement if the rents are around $1,000/-. Please send any relevant realtor website or listing to my email, I will take it forward from there.
We are all excited to see you next week, thanks in advance for help me out in this situation.
Yours friendly,
Harry
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- You will move to Toronto for work You know some people who live there Ask them for help finding accommodation Tell them where you would like to live Tell them the type of place you are looking for 73
- You will move to Toronto for work You know some people who live there Ask them for help finding accommodation Tell them where you would like to live Tell them the type of place you are looking for 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Rajesh, I am very happy to let you know that I h...
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Line 2, column 155, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'was', 'were'?
Suggestion: was; were
...ot aware of area and accommodation. You been living in Toronto from last five years,...
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Line 2, column 278, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help me find' instead.
Suggestion: help me find
...onditions. Hence, I am hoping you could help me to find an appropriate place for me and my fami...
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Line 4, column 3, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ild would use it daily for commute. I dont like to share the place with anyone so ...
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Line 4, column 216, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ouse or basement if the rents are around ,000/-. Please send any relevant realtor ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31111111111 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29642771428 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683333333333 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.2681684643 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2222222222 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311650331078 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114690304781 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851490883105 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16547498397 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787586531518 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.